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Thursday, 10 May 2018

Title: sunlight on the earth
Paragraph: what is the sun?
  • Star
  • Does not move
  • Surrounded by 8 planets
  • Part of the solar system
  • Small - big

Paragraph 2: What its made of?
  • 99.87% Hg
  • Core is the hottest part of the sun
  • Its hot
  • Energy

Paragraph 3: What does the sun do?
  • Compass
  • Shadow
  • West
  • Egyptian
  • Sunflowers know where the sun is
  • Total darkness
  • 8 minutes -
  • produces light and warmth  











Wednesday, 11 April 2018

bean boozled challege

Bean boozled challenge
On Thursday 12th April, Room 7 at Tamaki Primary School did the Bean boozled challenge. Miss Ashley wanted us to have a bit of fun at the end of the term.

The very First keru went up then keru Said i want to get a chocolate pudding but he got a jelly bean it was green then he
eat  then It tastes like lime but then he chewing the jelly bean.
Then the second
But tastes like grass then he

Then after that keru went to
puke at the bin rubbish bin.
Then lopi came up to have a
turn then his jelly bean was
a  white one when he tasted
like baby wipes then he spit it out to the rubbish bin then he came back to sit down mat.

Tuesday, 10 April 2018

crossing the bridge



crossing the bridge


On Saturday the 16th of March 1852, there was a farmer and her brown and white cow. The farmer’s name was called Peaches.

First the farmer Peaches got her cow and tried to get the cow to move “ come on Bessie.” She said as she was struggling to pull Bessie. Peaches grabbed her coins and she went to. William Johnsen the toll keeper. She gave William Johnson 1 coin for her and 1 for her cow.

“Evening Johnson” She said as She was waiting to cross the bridge.

William johnson took the money and said “thank you very much,enjoy your day.” William johnson used his strength to turn the winch so that. the farmer could go through the bridge and go to the market.And the cow got to the market and the farmer got the bucket and milked the cow to sell the milk to the villagers.

The farmer looked and looked to see if anyone was coming to get some milk. But then she saw one person in line to see if it tasted nice. So she gave the nice lady some milk and She said WOOPHE!!!, that's the best milk i've ever tasted.” so she bought some milk and took it to her kids and they shared the milk together. After she left she told everyone about the milk and there was a whole line of people waiting to get some milk. Then he got to the last person and there was no one else in the line. So she packed up all her stuff and took her cow home. Then they got home and they jumped straight on to their beds and went to sleep.

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Capital ‘I’
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Capital letters for names of places and people
Full stops at the end of a sentence
Speech marks when people are talking
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
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Words are written in past tense
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Connectives - next, then, afterwards
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Interesting and difficult adjectives
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Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
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Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
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Ideas/events in the right order
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3 paragraphs
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Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex
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Thursday, 22 March 2018

I Break my leg at the Swing After that  i went to get the ices pack for my leg Because i was hurt. it was Painful after that me i went back home and a nice Sleep when i wake up for Bekfast when i went Outside  when i starts to think. When i went to my mom and my dad Give me Chocolate when my mom was Waiting to for me Pick a Shoes when i pick red With stripes when we went back home when i Sleep. Scary and I was scared Of the Darkness  when my mom came when i Sleep with mom and dad when the darkness went a Away when the end. When the  other night it  was

Thursday, 15 March 2018

Tuesday, 13 March 2018

Bridge recount

In the 1852 there was a fisherman going on his boat and  they went on fishing but they had to cross the swing bridge. The fish man said  william can we go pass and william then william said yes you can go pass. Then they went fishing they got shark and they kill it then we eat the shark.
Then they went home and they went to

Sleep and the end.

Sunday, 18 February 2018

They went to  roll cast   and they got on the roll cast and they went up and down when Spin  Around and around when it  stop the Break  it Make a Noise and it stop.  someone came in the roll cast it and some people was the the was people Screaming and there Breath was Smell like Rotten eggs and they was Weddings  and it went to there Mouth. People Was starting to stop when they stop they went Back home  and they went to Sleep on their bed.