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Sunday, 1 July 2018

Focuses for writing this week


Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
Before and after the talking
How to put in other punctuation
They go before the speech markA
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
2 or more people are talking
Different words for ‘said’
Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs
Responded politely,screamed angril
EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.


MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.
One beautiful and sunny day three bff’s were going to adventure park at Leon’s house.
Railey asked “what should food should we get?”
Leon replied “We should get 3 boxes of pizza, 3 boxes of popcorn and 3 shape boxes also a lot of soda”

Fereti said “That will be a great idea Leon we will have the greatest adventure ever created from human kind!”

Wednesday, 27 June 2018

about the prince

Once upon a time One sunny day One beautiful bright sunny day One marvelous day One horrible rainy day In a faraway land In the deepest ocean In the darkest prison Far far away In a dark forest In a vast desert In a creepy dungeon In the scary woods In a haunted house In a movie set In a creepy maze In a wonderful school In a small town There was A beautiful girl An old man Royal family A wise girl A handsome man A traveller A scary monster A butler Guards Handsome prince beautiful queen Creepy clown Young princess Royal king Famous celebrity A gangster bodyguard A music producer A sad servant A sneaky thief Who was Lost Enormously rich Poor Diva Who lived in a cottage Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters Had a glass eyeball Had a ginormous family Lived in las vegas Who had robotic legs Who was a marvellous actor Who only ever had onions Who was a robber Who lived on the streets Part time DJ part time spy Who had only leg Who was a murderer Who was a huge nerd Who had one fat eye. Once there was a upon a time there was a handsome prince who had bright blue eyes. The prince was lonely but he was in love with a beautiful girl named Beyonce. The prince name call jack jack was afraid to talk beyonce then beyonce have a date with jack

Wednesday, 20 June 2018

room 7

Title: Room 7 Co-constructed narrative Labels: writing House on fire Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming Put the fire out with water hoses Smoke is strong Problem - there might be people inside?! PS4 is still inside. - valuables Clothes are inside. Might be cats or dogs inside Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug. Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed. Title Fire in the house Introduction One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long. Orientation Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigsty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere. Problem Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind. Solution Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour. Conclusion The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Thursday, 24 May 2018



Location:
Venus is the 2nd planet from the sun. Venus is also it the hottest planet in the solar system.Its the hottest planet in the solar system because the clouds on venus is trapping the air from getting in the planet so it's like a blanket and the inside is warm or hot.

Features:
Venus has meteor craters.Venus also has surface smoothed out by the volcano's recent lava flows.and also Venus is a medium sized planet.it’s size is 2.5 times as large as mercury. It rotates in the opposite direction than earth. Venus is unique because it’s the hottest and also the second planet from the sun.it also has volcanic regions also like mars. It also doesn't have life and water because it’s the hottest planet.

Discovery
The atmosphere of Venus was discovered by the russian polymath    Mikhail Lomonosov in the 1761. Venus’s atmosphere was found in the 1790.by german astronaut johann schroter.

Climate  
The temperature on venus is 462 degrees Celsius and Venus is has strong wind,Mercury and Venus is like twins because mercury's but Venus is larger temperature is 427 Celsius its kind of the same but mercury does not have clouds and is closest to the Sun.