Dear santa
thank you for the nerf gun so i can use to shoot people in a nerf gun battle and thank for the jumper so i can use when am cold and thank for the chips and the sausage sizzle to and thank you santa. By fereti
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Capital ‘I’
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Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
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Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
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Capital ‘I’
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Capital letters for names of places and people
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Connectives - next, then, afterwards
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Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
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3 paragraphs
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